Fleischmond's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon Go needs to be stopped]

Not bad for a beginner. Nice use of frame by frame and tweening where appropriate. The Art style and animation overall looks choppy and unfinished though.

That's that.
Now, if you can't take criticism, don't post your stuff online.
If you came here, expecting five stars and lots of praise all around, you're very mistaken.
And the thing is, nobody shat on you. You were given constructive criticism. Learn to deal with it or go start a tumblr and build your own echo chamber.

[Engineered]

cruel humanity

Even though you made the characters aliens it was obvious what part of human society you were pointing out.
The wish for a child in a relationship grows very strong sometimes and it´s horrible news to not being able to get pregnant.
Then there were two other parts: artificial fertilization and biological/genetic engineering.
It was a superb idea of making the doctor an cyborg. That way you didn´t have to make a "living" character who did not care for the life of others. He had to do this, because he was programmed to. - But even "real" doctors do that. They get the order from their customers/patients.

How the father wanted the baby to be "perfect" at birth reminded me of the movie "Gattaca".
How the mother did acceppt the mutated baby was very touching. (I was eating when I watched this and I thought I gotta hurl... )

Anyway you did an outstanding job. There are few artists on Newgrounds who want to have their movies deliver a "real" message.

Graphics: everything was well drawn.
Style: read the comment and you know why you got 10 on style.
Sound: it fitted.
Violence: for killing the unborn.
Interactivity: none.
Humor: for the mother who was happy about the babies.
Overall: again, you did an outstanding job. You are real artists.

professor-fate responds:

I have never seen the movie Gattaca, I'll have to look it up.
I just want to thank you for writing such an indepth review! Few people bother to go into this much detail nowadays, so I'd like to say thank you.

[Sonic Z - TUF]

This was not good enough.

The graphics were not very well made. You could have done better here if you tried.
This had no style at all, considering the hundreds of sonic flashes on NG. You should come up with your own ideas, if you like sonic and want to make a flash about it, then think of a good story.
The sound was just the song, not that the song was bad, but sounds are important too. The song was not good compressed though. Work on that.
Violence: sonic punches robotnik - wow =P

If you like making flash movies, then work on your graphics, try with your sound compression, look for sounds and think of a story.
If this was just to mess around with flash, then stop submitting it to NG.

Have a nice day.

[Memory? III]

so true...

This is where the world has gotten to.
Actually things like this happen every day (but not always do the bullied ones stand up against their punishers) . I think this deserves high scores, it was well made. The graphics were not "superb", but it fitted very well.
Keep going.

[my frist flash]

good

well for a first flash it was well done
looked very promising - sad that it was only that short...
seemed to have some storyline though (what i can´t so for most "first flash" submissions)
it was all very nice work - keep it up and make something that is longer and can tell some story...
keep it up :)

[Free Money]

hehe that was good

the graphics were ok (nice style)
the song was funny when it changed from sad to happy (hehe stole her wallet *lol*) that made me laugh

keep it up^^

[The NewGrounds Machine]

this was special^^

Yeah I like it!

Your graphics were well done and you animated everything just good.
This is a very original idea. Good style.
The sound was
Violence: well it scared the flash file^^'
Interactivity was... well... there was a play button...
It was funny in a original way - I like it.

All in all you´ve made something that could maybe become some frontpage material, well maybe not. But it has some potential. Very good work!

keep it up!

[NLDM 1: Bowser Vs Kamek]

not too bad

Well you made a flash movie that is worth to see.

Your graphics are not that good but you took your time so that they are not fucked up.
I can´t give you much points on style. Yeah sure you tried to make it all look good but some things were not as good as some others in this movie.
The sound: nice music^^ - but it didn´t end if you wanted to replay it. And there were no voices.
What we can say for the violence is all we can see in this movie. Well not that much^^'
It was interactive, ´cause you had to click here and there - but that was a good because there are often flash movies where you can´t read something because it disappears too quickly - good work on that.
Humor: yeah it was somewhat funny...

All in all it was some middle rank movie, but you can improve your skills and make better than that and try to put voices in it if it is possible to you.

keep it up

[F E A R]

very good work

I like this movie because it shows what can really be fearsome.

Your graphics were excellent! You took your time to show everyone what you wanted them to see.
The style was good, because you´ve created this special atmosphere of fear.
The sound was well chosen and it helped to create the atmosphere.
The violence (dead corpse) was shown in a way that is used in some movies I´ve seen^^. Good work on that!
Well the interactivity: there were buttons.
Humor: man that wasn´t humurous °°'

All in all very good - keep it up!